Tuesday, July 14, 2009

〈朝陽〉

一天的开始,我们会看到朝阳,一天的结束却看不到夕阳,因为朝阳使我们朝气蓬勃。一天的开始,我们倘若看不到朝阳,一天的结束依然看不到它,因为我们期待能再次看到它。

朝阳会不会只是一个虚脱的空壳?!谁知道...只要它出现在人的视线中,将产生出光亮的希望,使人们拥有无限的遐想。朝阳出现在山脉上,形成无比壮观的景色,明信片将使人爱不释手。朝阳与鲜红就好比天空与蔚蓝的联系,给世界、给天地万物无限的希望。

为了朝阳,野草有着无比坚强的耐力,春风吹了又再生。为了朝阳,狮子有着坚定的毅力,孩子看了无不敬畏的。而人类为着朝阳,产生出的化学作用就是无限的战斗力,印证无穷无尽的可能。。。朝阳不会长生不老,总会有消失的一天,但即使有一天星辰暗淡,天空不再出现蓝雨,月亮不再残缺,心中的记忆将与世长存。


I used 45min to finish this essay.
The title is 朝陽... What a difficult tittle for me and most of them in class.
I think it was a great experience for me because i always hope to improve my writing skills.
I hope that i could write something to touch myself and everyone.
I'm not really satisfied on it because NO main point, it can't catch my feeling and others' too... I guess!
I always try to write something special and standard to improve, but i failed it always--like our class introduction, i don't think that i've did a great job on it, but i had already no idea to continue or to modify it again.
It doesn't mean i had gave up...
May be i need more time more chance more skills and more experience.

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